opinion editorial

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Voices 250

On Friday February 20th Eastview High school in Apple Valley had a sing a thon. The auditorium was filled with student and some parent. It was called Voices of Hope. A sing-a-thon from 8:00 am to 12:00 am the next morning. The target goal was to raise twenty five thousand dollars. The event was held by the Eastview high school’s women choral. Some of the performers were Japanese classes, Spanish classes, lunch ladies, women choral, concert choir and more. “I never knew we had that much singing talent in our school that wierd but I think this is great that Eastview is doing this” said Travis Schweiger a student watching.

The event was well attended and a great number of students and faculty were involved. Allot of people donated money to claim a spot on the schedule to sing. Many alumni returned to support the cause and some even share their talent. Once special alumni returned; her name is Brooke Kilgarriff. Brooke is Miss Twin Cities and is also a former Eastview student graduating year of 2007, She was the announcer. She also sang a couple of songs.

Classes from every hour throughout the school day attended the event and filled up almost every seat in the performing arts center, the crowd continued to attend into the evening. There were a lot of volunteers who put a great of effort. Another main objective of the benefit was a petition, to keep musical education in the schools. This petition will show law makers that it is not a good idea to cut fund for music education in school. Because music is much more than just singing.

NCAA

It’s tournament time, March madness. All you here in your schools, workplaces, and other areas is college basketball. Both the Men and Women tournament is on the way. Everybody is talking who will deserves to be in, who are the sleeper, upset alert, and of course who will win the whole: who will be this year’s winner behind great teams like Rashad McCants 2005 UNC, Joakim Noah 2006 and 2007 Florida and last year winner Kansas with Mario Chalmers.

The NCAA committee picks the top 35 spots in the tournament on selection Sunday. And every year after selection Sunday comes the same arguments about what schools should’ve made the top 64. This year teams like Auburn and St Mary got shut out. It gets you to wonder who makes these decisions. It’s a ten person committee the chair person is Michael L Slive commissioner of the SEC.

Every year in the tournament we see school that we don’t recognize in you think I have never heard of this school before. We think of them as small schools. The “small schools” which aren’t really small has only one chance to go to the NCAA tournament and that is to win their division championship. No other way I bet the committee just doesn’t think about them. We never even hear of them unless the go somewhere far in the tournament. According to the NCAA their purpose is to govern competition in a fair, safe, equitable and sportsmanlike manner, and to integrate intercollegiate athletics into higher education so that the educational experience of the student-athlete is paramount. I get everything except the fair part. For school like Chattanooga and Morgan state it’s win your division or your season ends.

1. What is a problem/issue that our entire student body (our school, community, country, etc.) faces today? Straight up the NCAA, the championship brackets, the BCS

2. What is your view/position on the problem or situation?
Small school don’t get credit for how good they do especially in college football and basketball

3. What would you like to achieve with your editorial? (What is the desired result?)
Get it out there that the NCAA is not fair to other college

4. How will you persuade your audience to adopt your viewpoint as theirs? List at least 4 persuasive points.
A.) Undefeated teams aren’t always the number one teams
B.) Teams that probably could be better aren’t in the tournament
C.) BCS, the teams that win the championship aren’t always the best teams
D.) make the tournament another game so top 128 just one more game
5. How will you motivate your readers to take action>?
hopefully they read it and have the same opinion or I cahnge their oponion some how with my four points
6. How will your editorial serve a public purpose?
It’s a good issue for sports fan especially now that march madness has started and the college tournament

Theme Statement

Theme Statement: Dance Class, the different between other classes the uniqueness

Sources:


1.Ms Mahr teacher
2.David Prahl
3.Jack Sullivan
4.Lauren Harvey
5.Robbie Sikich


Questions:
1.What do you learn in dance?
2. What do you want kids to take from this class?
3. How does this differ from other class?
4. What is the overall purpose of dance class?

LEAD

On Friday February 20th Eastview High school in Apple Valley had a sing a thon. The auditorium was filled with student and some parent. It was called Voices of Hope. A sing-a-thon from 8:00 am to 12:00 am the next morning. The target goal was to raise twenty five thousand dollars. The event was held by the Eastview high school’s women choral. Some of the performers were Japanese classes, Spanish classes, lunch ladies, women choral, concert choir and more.

First Amendment

First Amendment

religion

speech

petition

press

assembly

Tinker Standard (1969) US sepreme court recognizes that first amendment protects on campus. student nor teachers shed their constitution rights to freedom of speech and expression.

Frasser Standard (1986) teachers can censor student speech that is vuglar or incident even if it does not cause a "material or substanitial disruption

Hazelwood Standard (1988)Supreme courts reduces the level of first Amendment protection provided to most school sponsored medis at public school. can be censor if goes against the school teaching/ corricular. does not apply to "public forum" student media. the newspaper on pregnancy.

Fredericks Standard (2007) it's a school athorize activity, suspende for 10 days"bong hits 4 jesus"

LIBEL: publication of a false statement of fact that seriously harms someone's reputation